I was just looking around, getting some blams and saves in and so I came around to this, which actually kept me watching throughout the whole episode. The storyline and narrative drew me in, it was entertaining without being too showy.

I can tell you put a good deal of effort into this, seems like you pulled off mouse drawing really well; it's a pain in the ass to do.

One thing I noticed is that you tried painstakingly to do the perspective manually, which looked decent but also there were parts where it could have been better. If you want to make your scenes really shine, you should check this out:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /98074
It really takes the guesswork out of perspective drawing and makes the field of depth a lot more realistic. Something I thought you'd appreciate.

Anyway, I really liked the voice-over, that was one of the aspects that kept me watching the most. The storyline was good too, but I wonder, where are you taking the next episode?

Can't wait to see your work on number 3.

Pretty funny, the animation was nice. I've noticed you've been doing some of your pose-to-pose inbetweens a lot like Catoblepas, which looks cool.

"It cures cancer!" "Uh, no. It does not. I actually think I have it now." "Well, shit!"

The sketchy style of this prologue was really cool and authentic. Thye limitation of color palette to black and white brought out the dramatic expressions in the characters.

This tune is catchy as fuck, bro. The applause is one of the things that makes it novel, as well as the whole concept of it. I'm not surprised this is one of your more popular recent songs.

The melody is really cool, I hum it in my spare time. I dig the turn it takes at 1:55 in. And the noises representing cumming at 2:20.

Kweaks can dig this.

The Glitch filter was used really cool here. The beat was a little different too. If there's something that needs a big repair, it isn't this song.

Good use of the Eurogate and the 'Spooky Break' drums.

Just like ComradeJack said, it could really fit a desperate or suspenseful part in a game.

I keep expecting a Left4Dead hunter's yell to play. Titles can do a lot to a song.